"Reducing word length to achieve conciseness," page 79, #1. The word given in #1 is "advise," and I would replace it with "warn."
"Reducing word length to achieve conciseness," page 79, #2. The word given in #2 is "anticipate," and I would replace it with "expect."
"Reducing sentence length to achieve conciseness," page 79, #1. I would rephrase the sentence "The progress reports should be complete by the 15th every month."
"Using the active voice versus the passive voice," page 78, #5. I would rephrase the sentence "The symposium on polymerization was attended."
"Avoiding sexist language," page 120, #3. I would rephrase the sentence "Every technician must keep accurate records for their monthly activity reports."
"Avoiding sexist language," page 120, #6. I would rephrase the sentence "The chairperson of the meeting handled the debate well."
"Reducing word length to achieve conciseness," page 79, #2. The word given in #2 is "anticipate," and I would replace it with "expect."
"Reducing sentence length to achieve conciseness," page 79, #1. I would rephrase the sentence "The progress reports should be complete by the 15th every month."
"Using the active voice versus the passive voice," page 78, #5. I would rephrase the sentence "The symposium on polymerization was attended."
"Avoiding sexist language," page 120, #3. I would rephrase the sentence "Every technician must keep accurate records for their monthly activity reports."
"Avoiding sexist language," page 120, #6. I would rephrase the sentence "The chairperson of the meeting handled the debate well."